Enhance Landing Page Content for Clarity and Professionalism #603
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Signed-off-by: Rushabh Shah <rushabhshah842@gmail.com>
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Thank you for your contribution, @Iamrushabhshahh! I'll quickly review this and get back to you soon. |
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@ruquanzhao, Thank you. I'm currently tied up with some work, so I won't be starting anything new for the next couple of days. I plan to pick something up over the weekend if there’s anything you'd like to change, feel free to let me know and I can adjust it on the go and wrap up the PR quickly. |
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| "message": "An efficient collaboration paradigm between App Developers and Platform Engineers" | ||
| "message": "An efficient collaboration model between app developers and platform engineers." |
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I want to capitalize 'App Developers' and 'Platform Engineers' because these terms are important concepts in the Kusion.
And I really don't know how native English speakers perceive the word paradigm. Could you explain it to me？
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Hey @ruquanzhao ,
Absolutely we can emphasize these two terms to give them more weight in the sentence. Making them bold or using strong tags would help highlight their importance effectively.
As for the word paradigm, you're right - its interpretation depends on the context. In our case, it clearly conveys a model, pattern, or way of thinking, a piece of terminology that aligns well with the groundbreaking work we're doing. Using it here adds depth and reinforces the innovative approach we're taking.
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@Iamrushabhshahh Once again, thank you for your professional and meticulous changes to the landing page. These updates will be applied to the kusionstack.io website shortly after the PR is merged. 🎉🎉🎉 |
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This PR refines the landing page content to improve clarity, grammar, and overall professionalism. The previous content contained typos, grammatical inconsistencies, and unclear phrasing, which have now been corrected for a more polished and user-friendly experience.
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Fixes (#602)
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