some formulations improved

Author: Maximilian-Stefan-Ernst

presentation.tex

@@ -140,21 +140,21 @@
 
         \vspace{1cm}
 
-        \only<5>{\textbf{these hurdles are often too high!}}
+        \only<5>{\textbf{These hurdles are often too high!}}
     \end{frame}
 
     \begin{frame}
         \frametitle{A \only<1-2>{day}\only<3>{year} in the life of \ldots}
         \vspace{0.8cm}
         \begin{wideitemize}
-            \item<2-> to test: barebone, minimal reimplementation
+            \item<2-> to test: minimal reimplementation
             \begin{itemize}
                 \item waste of time
                 \item not well tested
                 \item hard to reproduce
                 \item slow
             \end{itemize}
-            \item<3-> to deploy: put their code on github
+            \item<3-> to deploy: put code on github
             \begin{itemize}
                 \item bad user interface, no documentation
                 \item missing features
@@ -186,13 +186,13 @@
         Let's make a thought experiment...
         \vspace{0.8cm}
         \begin{wideitemize}
-            \item The Encyclopedia
+            \item encyclopedia
             \begin{itemize}
                 \item add an entry
                 \item some syntactical requirements\\
                 {\small 300-400 words, alphabetical, \ldots}
             \end{itemize}
-            \item Book
+            \item book
             \begin{itemize}
                 \item a draft already exists
                 \item add something everywhere it is applicable