Documentation fixes #365
Documentation fixes #365
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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe documentation for Camino Messenger was updated to correct minor grammatical errors, clarify phrasing, and improve readability. No technical content, instructions, or logic were changed, and no public or exported entity declarations were altered. Changes
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docs/camino-messenger/introduction.md (4)
25-25: Correct proper noun capitalization for GitHub
The sentence reads “our github for Go and Java.” Please capitalize GitHub as it’s a trademarked name.
43-43: Consider splitting this overly long sentence for readability
This line packs multiple clauses which can be hard to parse. For example, you could end the first sentence after “…all travel products.” and start a new one at “Your B2B wallet…”.
45-45: Vary sentence openings to avoid repetition
You have four successive “No more…” sentences for emphasis, but readers may tire of the repetition. Consider rephrasing one or two to improve flow.🧰 Tools
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[style] ~45-~45: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...it risk insurance and collection costs. No more invoicing and settlement procedure...(ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE)
[style] ~45-~45: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...re invoicing and settlement procedures. No more disputes, payment delays and credi...(ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE)
251-251: Standardize terminology: “message ID” and “timestamps”
Use “message ID” (two words) instead of “messageID”, and “timestamps” as a single word to match common usage.Apply this diff:
- In the gRPC metadata you can specify your messageID, from and to wallet addresses, … You'll also find latency and processing time stamps … + In the gRPC metadata you can specify your message ID, from and to wallet addresses, … You’ll also find latency and processing timestamps …
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[style] ~45-~45: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...it risk insurance and collection costs. No more invoicing and settlement procedure...
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[style] ~45-~45: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...re invoicing and settlement procedures. No more disputes, payment delays and credi...
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[grammar] ~56-~56: The plural determiner ‘these’ does not agree with the singular noun ‘metadata’.
Context: ...C metadata. There is a script to record these metadata of your requests and responses, which a...
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Context: ...nd reviews with Camino Network Partners lead to improvements of Message Types and th...
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Context: ... Through our Discord Messenger Protocol channel suggestions can be made and if adopted ...
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[style] ~249-~249: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...typed, which leads to more robust code. Protobuf provides built-in support for evolving ...
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[style] ~249-~249: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...ing backward and forward compatibility. Protobuf is language-agnostic. Nested messages i...
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docs/camino-messenger/introduction.md (2)
226-226: Approved—breaking-change policy clarification is clear
The phrasing about stepping away from semantic versioning is concise and correctly explains the rationale.
249-249:⚠️ Potential issueApply same verb-tense fix in Protocol Release section
This section repeats the v1alpha release text with the same tense issue. Please change “lead” to “led” here as well.- The `v1alpha` version first release was done on 18 January 2023. Feedback and reviews with Camino Network Partners lead to improvements … + The `v1alpha` version first release was done on 18 January 2023. Feedback and reviews with Camino Network Partners led to improvements …Likely an incorrect or invalid review comment.
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| **Performance Indicators** | ||
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| In the gRPC metadata every hop and processing time is registered. There is a script to record this metadata of your requests and responses, which is gathered in a clear .csv format. This way you have full transparency of the performance of the Camino Messenger and your providers. More info on gRPC can be found [here](https://grpc.io/docs/what-is-grpc/introduction/). | ||
| Every hop and processing time is registered in the gRPC metadata. There is a script to record these metadata of your requests and responses, which are gathered in a clear .csv format. This way you have full transparency of the performance of the Camino Messenger and your providers. More info on gRPC can be found [here](https://grpc.io/docs/what-is-grpc/introduction/). |
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Fix determiner agreement with “metadata”
“Metadata” is an uncountable noun, so “these metadata” is incorrect. Please change to “this metadata” or “the metadata.”
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- There is a script to record these metadata of your requests and responses
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| Every hop and processing time is registered in the gRPC metadata. There is a script to record these metadata of your requests and responses, which are gathered in a clear .csv format. This way you have full transparency of the performance of the Camino Messenger and your providers. More info on gRPC can be found [here](https://grpc.io/docs/what-is-grpc/introduction/). | |
| Every hop and processing time is registered in the gRPC metadata. There is a script to record this metadata of your requests and responses, which are gathered in a clear .csv format. This way you have full transparency of the performance of the Camino Messenger and your providers. More info on gRPC can be found [here](https://grpc.io/docs/what-is-grpc/introduction/). |
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these refers to the every hop and processing time
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@pmatsinopoulos Thank you for the clarification! You're absolutely right - if "these" refers to "every hop and processing time," then the usage is grammatically valid. I misinterpreted the sentence structure. The sentence makes perfect sense with that intended meaning.
The sentence works fine as written in your change. Thanks for explaining the context.
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| The `v1alpha` version first release was done on 18 January 2023. Feedback and reviews with Camino Network Partners lead to improvements of Message Types and the release of the first productive version "v1". A partner working with a specific Message Type to implement a connection to their system discovers errors or finds a concept is missing in the Camino MessageType. Through our Discord Messenger Protocol channel suggestions can be made and if adopted deployed with a new Message Type release. Conclusively one Message Type can be mature and and have only non-breaking improvements, while another Message Type is actively being developed. While "Accommodation" might be in a productive `v1`, we might have "Car Rental" in a `v2beta`, actively working with one or more partners to establish a productive `v2` for "Car Rental". As all message formats are released together, we simply have numeric releases that contain updates on one or more messages from one or more feature branches and PRs. | ||
| The `v1alpha` version first release was done on 18 January 2023. Feedback and reviews with Camino Network Partners lead to improvements of Message Types and the release of the first productive version "v1". A partner working with a specific Message Type to implement a connection to their system discovers errors or finds a concept is missing in the Camino MessageType. Through our Discord Messenger Protocol channel suggestions can be made and if adopted deployed with a new Message Type release. Conclusively one Message Type can be mature and have only non-breaking improvements, while another Message Type is actively being developed. While "Accommodation" might be in a productive `v1`, we might have "Car Rental" in a `v2beta`, actively working with one or more partners to establish a productive `v2` for "Car Rental". As all message formats are released together, we simply have numeric releases that contain updates on one or more messages from one or more feature branches and PRs. |
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Correct verb tense and add missing commas
“Feedback and reviews … lead to improvements” should read “led” (past tense). Also add commas around the conditional clause for clarity.
- Feedback and reviews with Camino Network Partners lead to improvements of Message Types and the release of the first productive version "v1".
+ Feedback and reviews with Camino Network Partners led to improvements of Message Types, and the release of the first productive version "v1".📝 Committable suggestion
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| The `v1alpha` version first release was done on 18 January 2023. Feedback and reviews with Camino Network Partners lead to improvements of Message Types and the release of the first productive version "v1". A partner working with a specific Message Type to implement a connection to their system discovers errors or finds a concept is missing in the Camino MessageType. Through our Discord Messenger Protocol channel suggestions can be made and if adopted deployed with a new Message Type release. Conclusively one Message Type can be mature and have only non-breaking improvements, while another Message Type is actively being developed. While "Accommodation" might be in a productive `v1`, we might have "Car Rental" in a `v2beta`, actively working with one or more partners to establish a productive `v2` for "Car Rental". As all message formats are released together, we simply have numeric releases that contain updates on one or more messages from one or more feature branches and PRs. | |
| Feedback and reviews with Camino Network Partners led to improvements of Message Types, and the release of the first productive version "v1". |
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200-200:⚠️ Potential issueCorrect verb tense to past tense
Change “lead to improvements” to “led to improvements” to match the past-tense context. Also consider adding a comma for readability.- Feedback and reviews with Camino Network Partners lead to improvements of Message Types and the release of the first productive version "v1". + Feedback and reviews with Camino Network Partners led to improvements of Message Types, and to the release of the first productive version "v1".
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docs/camino-messenger/introduction.md (6)
25-25: Use correct GitHub capitalization and preposition
The word “github” should be capitalized as “GitHub”, and since you’re referring to the platform page, use “on our GitHub” rather than “in our GitHub.”- An example implementation is provided in our github for Go and Java. SDKs are provided on our [buf.build]... + An example implementation is provided on our GitHub for Go and Java. SDKs are provided on our [buf.build]...
43-43: Split long sentence into clearer statements
This single sentence packs multiple ideas and reads as a run-on. Consider breaking it into two or more sentences (or a short bullet list) to improve readability.- The messenger brings one connection for all travel products, your B2B wallet is the single set of credentials you need for any connection and there is a Message Standard with sub messages that are implemented only once across every travel product, virtually creating one standard for any product. From discovery of suppliers and the products providers can offer, to the search for prices and availabilities and the booking, upselling and modification processes. + The messenger provides a single connection for all travel products. Your B2B wallet becomes the only credential required, and the Message Standard includes sub messages implemented once across all products, creating a unified standard. This covers: + - Discovery of suppliers and available products + - Price and availability searches + - Booking, upselling, and modification processes
45-45: Convert repetitive “No more” sentences into a bulleted list
Several sentences begin with “No more…,” which disrupts flow. A bullet list will succinctly capture the benefits and avoid repetition.- A great benefit of blockchain technology is that the payment can happen in the same transaction with the booking. No more need to have confidence in your partner that they'll pay your invoice at the end of the month. No more credit risk insurance and collection costs. No more invoicing and settlement procedures. No more disputes, payment delays and credit notes. It is as simple as passing the transaction notification from the Camino Messenger Bot to your payment platform to mark the booking as paid and find the funds in your digital wallet in stablecoin. + A great benefit of blockchain technology is atomic payment and booking in a single transaction. This eliminates: + - The need to trust that your partner will pay your invoice later + - Credit risk insurance and collection costs + - Invoicing and settlement procedures + - Disputes, payment delays, and credit notes + + It becomes as simple as passing the transaction notification from the Camino Messenger Bot to your payment platform to mark the booking as paid and secure funds in your stablecoin wallet.🧰 Tools
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Context: ...re invoicing and settlement procedures. No more disputes, payment delays and credi...(ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE)
56-56: Clarify pluralization for accuracy
“Every hop and processing time are registered” mixes singular and plural. For clarity, rephrase to “All hops and processing times are registered.”- Every hop and processing time are registered in the gRPC metadata. + All hops and processing times are registered in the gRPC metadata.🧰 Tools
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249-249: Reduce repetitive “Protobuf” sentence beginnings
This paragraph has multiple sentences starting with “Protobuf,” which hampers readability. Consider converting to a concise bullet list and varying sentence structure.- Protobuf's compact binary serialization format results in smaller message sizes compared to human-readable formats like JSON, making it efficient for data transmission and storage in performance-critical applications. This is particularly beneficial in our search messages where network efficiency is a priority and where the data payload is large due to the many products and services offered in search responses. Protobuf offers a better performance than JSON in terms of serialization and deserialization speed where Protobuf's native libraries are used. Protobuf schemas are strongly typed, which leads to more robust code. Protobuf provides built-in support for evolving data structure over time while maintaining backward and forward compatibility. Protobuf is language-agnostic. Nested messages in Protobuf are a powerful feature that allows definition of a Message Type within another Message Type. This is akin to declaring a class within another class in object-oriented programming languages. There is an extensive variation of field definitions known as "Well-Known Types". There is a vast amount of documentation and examples in [protobuf documentation](https://protobuf.dev/). + Consider revising into a bullet list to improve scanability: + - Compact binary serialization reduces message size vs. JSON + - Faster serialization/deserialization with native libraries + - Strongly typed schemas improve robustness + - Backward/forward compatibility simplifies evolution + - Language-agnostic support across ecosystems + - Nested messages enable hierarchical definitions + - Well-Known Types for common field patterns + - Extensive examples and docs at [protobuf.dev](https://protobuf.dev/)🧰 Tools
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Context: ...ing backward and forward compatibility. Protobuf is language-agnostic. Nested messages i...(ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE)
251-251: Standardize terminology and formatting
Use “message ID” (two words) instead of “messageID”, and “processing timestamps” (one word) for consistency and clarity.- In the gRPC metadata you can specify your messageID, from and to wallet addresses, so that the payload remains untouched and encrypted from P2P. + In the gRPC metadata you can specify your message ID, from and to wallet addresses, ensuring the payload remains untouched and encrypted peer-to-peer. - You'll also find latency and processing time stamps of the different hops, which gives you transparency and helps with troubleshooting. + You'll also find latency and processing timestamps for each hop, providing transparency and aiding troubleshooting.
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docs/camino-messenger/introduction.md (1)
226-226: Clear and concise versioning policy
The explanation of stepping away from semantic versioning and treating all protocol changes as breaking is clear and well-phrased. No changes needed here.
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95-95: Refine phrasing and punctuation for clarity.The sentence “In the below calculation example we compare two scenarios where on average 1000 searches are required for each booking.” can be improved by:
- Moving “below” closer to “example” for natural flow.
- Adding commas around “on average” and after “below”.
- Formatting large numbers with a comma.
- In the below calculation example we compare two scenarios where on average 1000 searches are required for each booking. + In the calculation example below, we compare two scenarios in which, on average, 1,000 searches are required for each booking.🧰 Tools
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95-95: Typo fix approved; consider adding a comma for readabilityThe corrected phrase “initial search is handled from cache” resolves the grammatical issue. For improved flow, you might insert a comma after “example.”
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119-119: Grammatical fix approved; comma suggestion for clarityUpdating “supplier who also hosts a Messenger Server” is correct. Optionally, a comma after the first clause can enhance readability:
- Any partner can run a Messenger Server and earn 70% of the network fee. + Any partner can run a Messenger Server, and earn 70% of the network fee.🧰 Tools
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[formatting] ~119-~119: Consider inserting a comma here, unless the first half is essential to the meaning of the sentence.
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125-125: Nitpick: add missing article in parentheses
The parenthetical “(No need to callAcceptCancellationas finalize call implies the acceptance)” is slightly off. Insert “the” before “finalize” and drop “the” before “acceptance” for smoother reading.Proposed adjustment:
- (No need to call `AcceptCancellation` as finalize call implies the acceptance) + (No need to call `AcceptCancellation` as the finalize call implies acceptance)
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121-121: Approve change to lookup phrasing
Changing “look-up from the TokenID” to “look-up with the TokenID” improves accuracy and readability.
132-132: Approve improved refund-condition phrasing
Updating “In case of the payment token address is not” to “In case of the payment token address not being” is grammatically correct and clearer.
167-168: Approve clearer role definition
Clarifying “the proposer is the supplier and the other party is the distributor” makes the counter-proposal flow more explicit.
| The process is designed to have the distributor and the supplier agree on the | ||
| cancellation cost during the process. Normally the cancellation conditions are fixed | ||
| during the initial booking process in rules. These rules can be interpreted | ||
| during in rules during the initial booking process. These rules can be interpreted |
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Fix awkward phrasing for clarity
The sentence “Normally the cancellation conditions are fixed during in rules during the initial booking process.” is grammatically confusing. Consider rephrasing to a more natural construction.
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| during in rules during the initial booking process. These rules can be interpreted | |
| Normally, cancellation conditions are fixed in rules during the initial booking process. |
These are some very minor documentation fixes. But, I think that they make the text read easier.