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 == Introduction
 === Purpose
 
-In conjunction with the https://library.wmo.int/idurl/4/68731[_Manual on the WMO Information System_] (WMO-No. 1060), Volume II – WMO Information System 2.0 (_Manual on WIS_, Volume II), the present Guide to the WMO Information System, Volume II – WMO Information System 2.0 _(Guide to WIS_, Volume II) is designed to ensure adequate uniformity and standardization in the data, information and communication practices, procedures and specifications employed by Members of the World Meteorological Organization (WMO) in the operation of the WMO Information System WIS 2.0 as it supports the mission of the Organization. The Manual on WIS, Volume II contains standard and recommended practices, procedures and specifications. The Guide to WIS contains additional information concerning practices, procedures and specifications that Members are invited to follow or implement in establishing and conducting their arrangements in compliance with the WMO technical regulations and in developing meteorological and hydrological services.
+In conjunction with the https://library.wmo.int/idurl/4/68731[_Manual on the WMO Information System_] (WMO-No. 1060), Volume II – WMO Information System 2.0 (_Manual on WIS_, Volume II), the present _Guide to the WMO Information System_ (WMO-No. 1061), Volume II – WMO Information System 2.0 _(Guide to WIS_, Volume II) is designed to ensure adequate uniformity and standardization in the data, information and communication practices, procedures and specifications employed by WMO Members in the operation of the WMO Information System 2.0 (WIS2) as it supports the mission of the Organization. The _Manual on WIS_, Volume II contains standard and recommended practices, procedures and specifications. The _Guide to WIS_, Volume II contains additional information concerning practices, procedures and specifications that Members are invited to follow or implement in establishing and conducting their arrangements in compliance with the WMO technical regulations and in developing meteorological and hydrological services.
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 === 4.1 Security
 
-For this initial version of the Guide to WIS, Volume II, existing guidance on information technology security (also known as cybersecurity) remains largely applicable. Please refer to:
+For this initial version of the Guide to WIS, Volume II, existing guidance on information technology security (also known as "cybersecurity") remains largely applicable. Please refer to:
 
-* _Guide to Information Technology Security_ (WMO-No. 1115)
-* https://library.wmo.int/idurl/4/28988[_Guide to the WMO Information System_] (WMO-No. 1061), Vol I, Appendix E - Annex To Paragraph 7.8 (ICT Service Incident Management), and Appendix F - WIS IT Security Incident Response Process
+* _Guide to Information Technology Security_ (WMO-No. 1115);
+* https://library.wmo.int/idurl/4/28988[_Guide to the WMO Information System_] (WMO-No. 1061), Volume I, Appendix E. Annex To Paragraph 7.8, 1. ICT Service Incident Management; and Appendix F.WIS IT Security Incident Response Process.
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 === 5.1 Competencies
 
-For this initial version of the _Guide to WIS_, Volume II, existing guidance on competencies remains largely applicable. Please refer to _Guide to the WMO Information System_ (WMO-No. 1061), Volume I, Appendix A - WIS training and learning guide.
+For this initial version of the _Guide to WIS_, Volume II, existing guidance on competencies remains largely applicable. Please refer to _Guide to the WMO Information System_ (WMO-No. 1061), Volume I, Appendix A. WMO Information System Training and Learning Guide.